PUBLIC MARKS from katerinegarth with tags "children child story" & "to tell to a child"

I think is a cool child story, but it can be more exciting

The subject of the story is so fresh to me, which is about twelve princesses secret of dancing and the king seeking to find out how it happened and where they danced at night. But I dont like the end that the old solider married with the eldest princess and be the kings heir. At the end, the old solider says 'I am not very young, . In my opinion, it might be 'I am not very young, so I dont want to choose any one of these beautiful young princesses. I wish they can live happily with the twelve princes showed at night. Even I dont want to be your heir. My ability is not good enough to overcome administrating a country. I still like travelers life, so I want to keep it go on. Above all is just my clumsy thinking.

This is really good. Enjoyed reading it.

I must agree with the words here. When I was eight, I wasn't exactly sure what an eider-down bed was...but then again not like we can criticize the author. ^.^

An illustrated child story for children about author such as Brothers Grimm and Hans Anderson illustrated by Annabel Spenceley.

Heart breaking...perfectly pictured with the excellent word choice.